After along time never get mood to write, Finally I got it now. I got it because I have a lot of task to do from My writing class with Mrs. Devi. So, here I go.
Today I wanna write about English words error. So, it's kind of analyzing activity but not science analyzing, it's english words analyzing. I give you this picture.
Yes, from the picture above please look the top status. There are alot of mistakes such as :
1. After 'learn' in the first line you must give it 'to' or let the 'write' using '-ing' cause that's the rule.
2. Look 'English' in the first line! Don't pit full stop after it because you've got 'but' after it. So, actually it should to be one word cause 'but don't use to be the first word in a sentence.
3. Look at 'i' at the first line! it supposed to be a acpital letter.
4. Then the word 'learn' after 'simply' in the line 2, it supposed to replace by 'tend' cause i think do not allowed to have same word in a sentence.
5. The word ' so then afterwards', it can be replace with ' by making mistakes' cause it make the effective one i think.
6. The word 'i' in ghe second line it should be a capital letter.
7. ' quite waste time' here is not a sentence cause there is no subject and predicate so it should be ' it's quite waste time'.
8. And then before word ' better' in the last line it supposed to have 'however it is'.
9. The last is word 'then' in the last line, it should be 'than' .
It's better if we check our article before publish it. So, what's your mistakes ??
See you !!
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